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punctuation lesson

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i(')ll wash(ed) the pans and
the plates like a raging storm; a
tsunami would be the best word out
of four answer choices and i figure on
that test, i'll fail

(it doesn't matter how good you
are; nobody makes it to the top
without cheating)

s
   w
      i
r
   l

a
   n
 d

    w
 e
    a
v
       e

your words
because we
are just
members of
a gene pool
and we're
trying to
be the most
valuable of
them all

there must be
something in the
water or in the rain droplets

(pitter
p
a
t
t
e
r
!

against the ground)


that's driving everybody
crrraaazzzy
and i'm not looking forward to
a second black death;
we already mock the things
that kill the things we
love, what's the point in
getting attached
Not a prompt, but an idea I got.
(Lots of random things)

-Chell
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FridgePoetProject's avatar
Stunning!  Your pieces are always visually exciting as well as beautifully written, and this one has even an extra edge in that department.  I love what you did with the "swirl and weave," as well as the "pitter patter."  Nice!!