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dissatisfaction of choosing your own adventure

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i wrote
a) goodbye
b) hello
and i hit
a) "send"
b) "delete"
and i stared at
the screen in
a) displeasure
b) hope
that i would
a) never
b) maybe
see you again.
Inspired by one of my favorite poems,  sergei yesenin i'm carving i love yous 
into a brick wall
and you're on the other side of it
and you can't see it. 
you can't even hear
my fingers clawing into it 
as the blood contours
every painstaking line
that i make for you.
i'm carving i love yous 
into a brick wall
and you're on the other side of it
and you can't see it. 
you can't even hear
my fingers clawing into it 
as the blood contours
every painstaking line
i'm carving i love yous 
into a brick wall
and you're on the other side of it
and you can't see it. 
you can't even hear
my fingers clawing into it 
as the blood contours
i'm carving i love yous 
into a brick wall
and you're on the other side of it
and you can't see it. 
you can't even hear
my fingers clawing into it 
i'm carving i love yous 
into a brick wall
and you're on the other side of it
and you can't see it. 
you can't even hear
i'm carving i love yous 
into a brick wall
and you're on the other side of
 by my lovely friend chromeantennae. :heart:
ALSO, this poem's a remake of this (that I wrote a long time ago):  Janusvanilla
chocolate
has never tasted so
has never tasted so
bitter
when tossed into the chasm
when tossed into the chasm
of utter
of utter
i n s a n i t y;
o p u l e n c e;
a pleasure unlike anything you've ever seen-
a disatisfaction unlike anything you've ever seen-
trickery and treason is a path only the most evil shalt tread;
but it can feel ever so h-u-m-a-n,
the way in which we are all monsters,
no matter what path we choose.



If you're confused & you're thinking, "why are there a's & b's?"
The point is for it to be like a "Choose Your Own Adventure" book. 

A clearer version of this is here:  dissatisfaction of choosing your own adventure #2i wrote
a) goodbye
b) hello
and i hit
a) "send"
b) "delete"
and i stared at
the screen in
a) displeasure
b) hope
that i would
a) never
b) maybe
see you again.

(Which version of coding is better?)

ANYWAYS: hope you liked it. c:

-Chell
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Shinseinasenshi's avatar
Find your fate books were so much fun. 😏